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Write To Your Face's avatar

Hello again MAQ!

I enjoyed this read! I like how the shadow represents a past self the character is trying to move on from. Many of us want to forget that person, but the thing is, it's a part of our story. The only way to heal from past traumas is to face them...that's how we gain freedom and peace. It's not easy, but ignoring it only makes it harder.

Thanks again for sharing this!

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Al Pal's avatar

This was beautiful! 🤍 deeply enjoyed

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Johnie Jenkins's avatar

I am glad I stopped and had a read. Thank you for sharing.

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aven mire's avatar

"Shadows, once returned, don’t leave quietly." I love this line!

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Venusia Wellness's avatar

This is so beautiful! 🤍

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A.Nooks's avatar

This just give chills. love it!

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Maq's avatar

Thanks so much ❤️ ❤️

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S Ikbal's avatar

this is so tender and beautiful!

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leanne 💗's avatar

your writing is so beautiful! I love the image of the child reuniting with a mother they don’t remember

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Maq's avatar

Thank you so much ❤️

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The Book On Publishing's avatar

Enjoyed that a lot. Cheers

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Maq's avatar

Thank you so much ❤️

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Grey Elliot, he/him's avatar

A piece about your daylight shadow that is everchanging and fading as time goes on?? Talk about poetry. Smells like a hopeful summer and yearning.

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Maq's avatar

Thank you so much ❤️😭

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Carlos Relano's avatar

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Maq's avatar

Thanks for sharing. I'm already subscribed

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Maq's avatar

Yes, so am I 🤗

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